Fish

Hello I wrote this poem on the 8/3 - 2011 and I just found it in my english book. I've added a little bit but I'm REALLY suprised on how much thought I put in. Ok so here it is:

I squarm around. Hoping not to be found. By grey bodies and sharp white teeth. That grip into your fins. I have two huge eyes. That take up a tenth of my body. I have a pointy red tale. That follows behind. As I zoom along. I overlook shimmary. Colourful scales. As the sun. Catches their own light. I hear the same old string. Wounding up and plopping down. I've heard it a lot in the past years I've been living. Nowadays fish are getting death. And more death. Nothing but death. Especially those fish. In Tauranga. Oh my girlfriend could of died. Oh. From that terrible. Oil spill. Poor. Poor. Fish. And sea. Creatures. I mean. It's either those pesky grey finns that follow you around. Or. Or worse. Humans. They can follow. By having those really. Weird covers on their eyes. Or maybe their some type. Some type of creature. Living in the sea. But I like how they. Give us food. On a hook. It's quite sneaky. But I just wait. The humans put me back. When I was younger. I guess they thought. I was too small. That was very nice. Of them. Seeing they usually. Eat us. If I was a inch bigger. I would be on a platter. Waiting for a visit. From the cat. To jump up. And nibble. I can't imagine. Life. Without water. Like humans. Can't imagine life. Without air. But it would just be too. Risky for either one of us. If I was in a sharks tummy. I wouldn't be able to. Swim that 100 metre. In school. On Monday. I wouldn't. ( still ) Be able. To have. A girlfriend.


By Torz

Oh by the way all the full stops are meant for you to pause. But some of the stops are actually real ( you know what I mean ) so hows life? Wow...

Okay so what is this magical creature? Please comment and tell me. This poem is a type or p........... also comment on what the type of poem is too.

We have EXAMS next term. Two exams ( science and english ) are TWO HOURS long!! And I have 3 other exams but they are all 1 hour long. AHHHH!!!! Oh well thats why I am studying. My english teacher said we did have to write poems and ' feel ' them.

Tell me what you thought about my poem please!

^^&!@$ Torz $@!&^^

Is is a shark attack??!!

Hello...I havn't seen you in a while. Yesterday it was Dad's birthday & so to celebrate we went on a boat, with a few friends. We had to drive for about 45 mins to get the the glenbrook beach warf. We all got ourselves into the dingy & we were off. They ( the other fam ) own a dark blue boat ... " She's a beauty " my Dad would say. When we got to the boat we all greeted eachother, and my friend Kayleigh showed me around the boat. Ok so, theres a kitchen, home theatre, toilet / bathroom, lounge & a few more places to sleep. But they were quite damp from the leak that went up to about a metre. ( But apparently that happend last time..) It took about 2 hrs ( probably less ) to get to our destination ' Cornwallis. ' Last time Kayleigh went she lost her bright green watch, so its probably gone by now because we couldn't find it. It was fun playing with the different coloured sand & my coke can. ( It was empty ) I'm not sure what to say now because this was about two weeks ago...

We went fishing for a while & Jake's friend Mitchell caught a shark. It was small but the other family kept getting sharks as well. So of course we were in SHARK TERRITORY!!! Oh well. At least we didn't get eaten! Did you know that the chinese cut off shark fins ( and leave a open wound ) and chuck them back in...sad :(

Sorry I havn't posted anything in AGES but I have been VERY busy :)

Cheerios...

Ciao ... ( chow ) - italian

Zai Jian ( Zai Gen ) - Manderin ( type of Chinese language )


BYE BYE~!!

Hope you have a great day!


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Hello again...don't you just LOVE school holidays??

Well if your bored & your allowed on the computer you should play these awesome games...just click the link and your up, up, & away :) well you know what I mean!

http://www.gamefudge.com/Duck-Life-2

http://www.gamefudge.com/fishy

http://www.gamefudge.com/Ultimate-Sonic

also if you clock all these games then just have a look on gamefudge website. There are heaps of fun games but some of them you might get irritated and annoyed with... :) teehee


For your holiday compitition / quiz you have to tell me what sport these people play...& if you win...you have the glory from my blog :) ...


1) Irene van Dyk
2) Dan Carter
3) David Beckham
4) Alexandra Stevenson
5) Colin Meads
... some are hard & some are very easy :)


Have great holidays :)




** Torz **

Did You Know?

Hello again...did you know that Auckland had a 2.9 earthquake on Friday 1st July? I think it was something to do with the volcanic thing because the centre of the earthquake was at Mission Bay. Things you learn huh? Anyway you probably heard a big bang ( for the earthquake ) and so Dad & I thought it was a big truck passing our house but it was the earthquake.

Sorry I havn't been keeping up but I try to in my spear time. Oh & we got a black drum kit!!! Yay so now we are learning the drums " oh yeah!!" :P


Thanks :)

>**! Torz !**<


Woo we have so much english homework ... I'm not even kidding :(


Bye!

My Favourite Websites...

Hello again if you are bored on a afternoon after school then you better check this out! This always works when I am bored...I always go on my favourite websites. Here are some:

www.everybodyedits.com

www.stardoll.com

www.clubpenguin.com

www.miniclip.com

& of course....






















wait for it wait......




















scroll down keep going!!

















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ummm where were we.....( keep going ...) I whisper



















OK!!!! Its time....drum roll please...







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BUT... it has __ NO __ capitals :P



Thanks for your patients :)

Torz :P

Wow...

Sorry!!! I havn't posted any thing in about 2 MONTHS!!! I'm soo soo sorry...I have been soo busy! So how have you been for the last 2 months?! Lets talk about school...well St Dominics.. :) So the first time we made something in food tech we made a sandwich...um I made one when I was four...!! So anyway we made it with sliced cheese, grated carrot, some lettuce and of course 2 slices of bread per person. In the lesson we talked about what we had to do before we started...the basics. Like washing your hands & putting on the apron. When we had done our dishes & had our sandwich's in our containers we could go home! On the way home I tried to eat my sandwich but it fell everywhere! Oh boy...!!
The next cooking lesson we made pizza!! Yum!! How we made it. We had a bought base & all the ingredients were there...this is what we used for the toppings: Grated cheese, a chopped frankfurter, tomato paste, corned beef, tomato sauce & a tomato. We put it in the oven at 180 *C - sorry had to use the star as the celcius thingy! We put it in the oven for 15 mins until all the cheese was melted. When the pizza had a few minutes left to cook we could smell that lucious smell of cheese & frankfurters mmmmmmm! When we took it out of the oven we cut it up into 4 pieces ....& somehow I got the biggest piece even know I chose last... :) Anyway I better get going I have a bit more English assignments to tell you about!!

Have a great day ... I am definately enjoying food tech especially the part where you get to eat it!!

Thanks

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Happy Easter!

Hello again, in a weeks time it's easter so I am going to make little boxes ( we learnt in maths ) and put little easter egggs in. I'm also going to colour the box with lots of colours. As you know easter is all about Jesus dying on the cross and coming alive in a few days. Its called the Resurrection...( we learnt this in r.e of course.) I have a bit of homework to do in the holidays but it's bound to happen. I have to write three haiku poems about the sea, colour in this sketch in r.e, paint sea creatures for art, make a postcard about a planet I like in science and last but not least create a box for maths. Easy peasy you might be thinking. Well it sort of is except I have more things I want to do in the holidays then homework like...nah just kidding I won't bore you with my long list!! Anyway so Happy Happy Easter and I hope you all have great holidays!


Happy Holidays! - have fun on your easter egg hunt!

>**~ Torz ~**<


BY THE WAY THIS is a post that I didn't publish AGES ago!! I'm so sorry but I hope you had a great easter anyway! And every other special day ( anzac, labour day, guy fawkes etc)

Oh by the way about a week ago I got given a sports award ( at the sports prizegiving ) It was very exciting and I got the most valued award for netball out of my team. We went to burger king after that because we hadn't had dinner. I just remembered that it would've been tonight ( a week ago ) that I got it. Tenera, Rhiannon and I are all in the same class. I'm mainly friends with Tenera but Rhiannon and Tenera are still having fights about CHAIRS!! I know right! Oh well some people just NEVER change...lol


Thanks again ~:() fail attempt of Homer Simpson ( I have a book some where at home that tells you what arrows to use and stuff )


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Thanks again :)